United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
I can really relate to this poem.... This poem has touched my heart
That was really good...... Its hard to try to fit in with the people. You feel you have to be accepted. But we dont if more people could appreciate the ability for someone to just be them self! Very VERY good.
Thanks to your way of writing, I didn't have trouble immersing in this poem. This depiction can be a sad reality for some. Good job on bringing the point forward.
There are many poems about time but yours was rhymic and worded just right. Again another wonderful piece you offered to us.
I really loved the word choice as well as the flow of the story. It choked me up a bit at the end there. Really well done.
it is very well written. I enjoyed reading the words that many have read before. It was easy to relate to some of these situation. It was truly beautiful. I LOVED it so very much!!! 100%!!!