United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
This is so true, we all feel this way when this happens to us, I love how you rhyme and gave it detail as well, keep up the work! Enjoy your day.
Genius, it was funny hun and very enjoyable.
I really liked this story. I love how you incorporated well known characters from a vast amount of children's stories into an investigation to figure out what really happened to Humpty. Brilliant!
As I stated in our last conversation, this is excellent. I can't wait to see you expand on it.
Brilliant! I loved it!
Excellent!
Indeed, it can be observed that the greatest of men treat the physically disabled/challenged harshly. The entire society views them as useless brats born to die without honour.
This piece of writing briefly describes this bitter and cruel truth in elegant words.
But, there are some mistakes present in the writing.
"...as painful and anything inflicted by a real weapon."
In many instances, you forget the Oxford Comma.
