United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Well versed piece that flows with pain of another
I would suggest using stronger word choice, but since the people you're writing about are shallow, it makes a good parallel to keep it more simple. Good story about a common issue that isn't spoken of enough.
Even though I have never experienced bullying, I could deeply relate to this as the school I am in is for rich people and I am average, so I didn't really think I would fit in. Good use of words, but there could be a few deeper vocabulary. Good job!
You shared her side perfectly. The stuttering, the messing words up. It was well written.
Very good! I enjoy this story a lot! Missing a few commas here and there, but it's probably different in the U.K.
I've been trying to keep up with this series in my small amounts of free time lately, I'd like to see where this could head.