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Andy (Formerly Apemann)

apemann is from GB United Kingdom • 65 y/o • Male

Writer, story-teller, reader, dog-lover and humourist!

Reviews Received

auroraharrison
Aurora Harrison reviewed Don't Call Me Sweetheart

This story is so stupid. It has no meaning whatsoever, and is just completely not a use of writing. Go waste ur time on something more valuable!

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auroraharrison
Aurora Harrison reviewed ...After the Night Before

What the freaking hell does this even mean

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Dari-the-bookworm
Dari Poulson reviewed Blackout

So little words, so much meaning.

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hidethetears
Tiffany reviewed Pretend You Don't See Her

I can relate. I am the girl they all ignore. And it makes me so sad to know that someone else has also gone through this and felt the need to write it

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Anthony210
Anthony210 reviewed How to Write A 'Teaser'

Awesome advice my friend!

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taehyungsmullet
lol⁷ reviewed Thirteen

ha. relatable

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PaulFa
P. F. reviewed Reflections - Portrait of a Serial Killer (Part Four)

I don't know what your trying to accomplish with this piece of writing, but it's definitely not a structured shorty story. This reads like a confession for sure, but not a shorty story. There is no specific incident, rising action, or climax. This is like a crime report that is written well, but that's about it.

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