United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Genius, it was funny hun and very enjoyable.
With all my heart I loathe people that do it to others like that. It is just so.... ugh. Anyways like the way you came about with this. It is excellent put out and on point.
There are many poems about time but yours was rhymic and worded just right. Again another wonderful piece you offered to us.
I really liked this story. I love how you incorporated well known characters from a vast amount of children's stories into an investigation to figure out what really happened to Humpty. Brilliant!
Through out life we all have adventures, at times they are romantic ones. Andy has done a stellar job on this story. Paul ugh, well read the story and you will see what I mean. Carol conjures up other feelings. I thought she might become famous, but....well I don't want to give it away so read it yourself.
Before I got to the ending I had many ideas of what would happen and I think you will too. Good job Apeman.
As I stated in our last conversation, this is excellent. I can't wait to see you expand on it.
Excellent!
Indeed, it can be observed that the greatest of men treat the physically disabled/challenged harshly. The entire society views them as useless brats born to die without honour.
This piece of writing briefly describes this bitter and cruel truth in elegant words.
But, there are some mistakes present in the writing.
"...as painful and anything inflicted by a real weapon."
In many instances, you forget the Oxford Comma.
It was good, I personally really feel the pain even just reading it makes me feel bad.