United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
I liked this poem and how it was put together. Good job, as always.
While definitely interesting I found this story to be a rather good angle on a normal action.
I've been trying to keep up with this series in my small amounts of free time lately, I'd like to see where this could head.
Good stuff.
Really helpful!
I would suggest using stronger word choice, but since the people you're writing about are shallow, it makes a good parallel to keep it more simple. Good story about a common issue that isn't spoken of enough.
I understand what a person would go through since I have and still am getting bullied.
The first time it has ever started was in second grade and it has never stopped ever since.
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I have been reading the chapters and I have to say by far these are the best things I have ever read in my entire life (and i read over 20 books in 2 weeks or less)