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Andy (Formerly Apemann)

United Kingdom • 65 y/o • Male

Writer, story-teller, reader, dog-lover and humourist!

Reviews Received

From_Me reviewed Pretend You Don't See Her

i really like it because its true and that always happens to someone and its the true on how people think about others thank you for making me understand how words can really hurt someone

6 Dec, 2016 0

Auron reviewed Going Away - Chapter 1

Very good! I enjoy this story a lot! Missing a few commas here and there, but it's probably different in the U.K.

8 Dec, 2016 0

From_Me reviewed Don't Call Me Sweetheart

it wasn't bad. But i think it needs a little more work

12 Dec, 2016 -4

From_Me reviewed For One Night Only

i really liked it

12 Dec, 2016 0

lemonslice reviewed Life in Black and White... and Grey

I love micro fiction because of stories like this one. The first line sounds very differently when read a second time. :)

Keep up the writing!

28 Dec, 2016 1

lemonslice reviewed Classification

A couple of dialogue punctuation errors, but otherwise a pretty funny tale. Reminiscent of Monty Python delight.

28 Dec, 2016 0

lemonslice reviewed Witness

Not friends with Robert Rankin, are you? :)

28 Dec, 2016 0

Kat reviewed Imperfect

There are some great aspects of this price of writing, but there is also a feeling of incompletion. Please do write more.

1 Jan, 2017 1

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