United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
the title the end all just falls in place.Maybe you can add a bit more description...maybe he can go through what happened during the day and the suspense can be that hes the one who is going to die.Just a random though that i got after reading the story .....:) but overall it was good
Your story has a darkness that stays within you penned it well thanks.
It may not, as you say, be your best, but it is the truth behind the words of this story that struck me. A reader can't ask for any more than that.
I'm 78 and deal with this uncompromising urge to write every day. The worst is when the dreaded 'writer's block' prevails. The minutes, and hours, and days drag on and on.
And then, suddenly, I'm writing again and once again there aren't enough hours in the day or days in the week.
I give this five stars for heeding the prodding to get it down on paper. I think of how many jewels are lost because writers do nothing because they don't think it's good enough. I say poppycock - write! and then write some more.
Ciao,
JT
this is good, but hard to relate to for me. but i like it very much.
I really loved the word choice as well as the flow of the story. It choked me up a bit at the end there. Really well done.
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it is very well written. I enjoyed reading the words that many have read before. It was easy to relate to some of these situation. It was truly beautiful. I LOVED it so very much!!! 100%!!!
This is very good but as someone that’s been in many similar-ish situations it isn’t really all that realistic in some ways. But also it’s nice and I like it so good job.