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Andy (Formerly Apemann)

apemann is from GB United Kingdom • 63 y/o • Male

Writer, story-teller, reader, dog-lover and humourist!

Reviews Given

Drowned by Auron

A very creditable first effort in the micro-fiction genre.

Be wary of being 'too clever', though: why you could not have used the word 'shirt' instead of 'maillot' is beyond me... Remember, you want to engage your readers, not alienate them :-)

Overall, a good start. Well done!

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Rejection by Life_is_Hard

Well here's one day when you can feel very much accepted. :-) Good poem.

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Epitaph by miller9904

So much said in so few words. I like this - a lot!

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Little Hands by Elisenicole2014

Sweet and touching. Lovely!

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Living Fears by Elisenicole2014

I'm not sure why you chose to present your work in such a form as it was unnecessary (and a little confusing, to be honest)

Overall the poem is good, if a little overlong and slightly repetitive in places. A like your imagination and your use of words. You clearly take a great deal of care over your work and choose your words carefully. There are some who could learn a thing or two from you :-)

Well done and keep writing. It's a pleasure to read your work.

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Drown It Out by NobodyImportant

A surprisingly poignant and hard-hitting story which is well told. A very good job overall. Sure, there are one or two minor errors in spelling and grammar, but nothing that seriously detracts from the story. Well done!

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Who Are You by 🌸Fate

Simple, heartfelt and so typically you!

Nice one, hon...

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Spring by Blackcat

I quite enjoyed the style of your writing. It's innovative and interesting, in spite of the bleak subject matter. I have to admit to being somewhat baffled by your 'author's note' comment... Overall, a commendable effort.

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