Bosnia and Herzegovina • 8 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
good. the emotion is a little more here this time! like it. keep it up :)
I like where the story is going, But it's not there yet. keep working on it :)
this is good. really relatable.
this was good, but told many times in different versions. well what you added to it was good, it was very vague and very been there done that. i don't mean to offend you, this is just my opinion