United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
oh my gosh, perfect <3
I'm not an expert on the technical aspects of poetry, but I agree with your sentiments here.
i knowed when i friended you i knowed i changed a life :]
i think this is a really good story because your expressing there love for your significant other but on another note i don't think it is a good story because in the tittle they didn't make it that clear about if it was about a baby baby or your boyfriend or something
At some points the rhymes felt akward and out of place but other then that i really loved it short and straight to the point with so many hidden layers great job
Omg. I love this, so well written. Thank you so much.
