United Kingdom • 42 y/oReviews Received
Great build up of tension..... & I just wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Hilarious!
Great short story. I liked much of the description throughout and also the hopeful ending
You are a very good writer. The structure of this story is great as have been the other two stories of yours I have read. the first half of the story leads the reader into a completely different assumption of what to expect from what actually gets revealed. It captures your interest with intrigue , and then descends into melancholy romance which ends just right without becoming stilted. Great writing.
Great structure, plot development, and imaging. Good character descriptions. Wonderful, gritty story. I like the reality. Great punctuation, and dialogue. I also liked the positive ending that leaves the reader with the assumption the main character had been set free, as in released from a prison, and would be starting a new life . Given a second chance. Great writing in my opinion.
oh wow, that ending though! this was amazing!
Great story, It really captured my attention from the get-go!