United Kingdom • 57 y/oReviews Received
Fantastic!
Hope to read some more soon
Really enjoyed your story. Nice build-up of the characters.
Shame about a few spelling mistakes like:
house being reprocessed instead of repossessed, or taught face instead of taut (Hope you don't think that is being pernickety)
Look forward to reading more....
I liked this.... Liked the way you show us Simon's 'annoying' characteristics drop by drop....
I could not imagine where the story was going either...
Hope you write some more....
Very well written. Tragic, and true in instances. I liked the sudden revelation that Rose had actually killed her abusive husband. No prelude leading up to it, just wham, and then no wind down. Made me wonder how many people exist like this, and of course the bird is in such contrast to her. Great story.
As I started reading your story, I become super engrossed into Gillian’s life. I felt really sorry for her, so when you showed the readers the alternative path, I was glad to see her get control over her life. Thank you for sharing your work!
This was a mighty fine read. I enjoyed every minute of it, I can't wait to see what else you come up with.