Blackcat

I like the story because the man's granddaugther didn't give up despite the fact that her grandfather was in a coma all that winter. Which goes to show that we can go through the winter of our lives, hope yet springs eternal

I quite enjoyed the style of your writing. It's innovative and interesting, in spite of the bleak subject matter. I have to admit to being somewhat baffled by your 'author's note' comment... Overall, a commendable effort.

An unusual and interesting story which was well told. I like your imagination and your unusual ideas. Well done!

I like your writing style, it is poetic and feels smooth and seamless. You manage a huge amount in a very small space. Thanks for sharing.