United States • 82 y/oReviews Given
Well played. Thank you for some moments of fun.
An interesting tale. I'm curious as to the progression your mind went through until you selected the name Franks for the visitor.
Suspected the ending, but still very well written and much enjoyed. A lesser talent may not have handled the plot as well. Thank you for giving me a good time.
Good suspense but too many period and quotation mark errors. Also, the word whole for hold and once worst for worse. Hope you'll make corrections.
Excellent commenting and fresh descriptions. Thank you for giving me a very good time.