Australia • 26 y/oReviews Received
This is an okay little effort - but we have had so many similar stories. It would have been much nicer if you had offered us something new and original as you have talent that can offer far more than what others have already done before...
It is a true thing that happens. In which I also like how this was written. Keep on writing please.
This isn't a story, first of all, it's an attempt at a poem.
The problem I have is that it doesn't invoke any imagery or emotions for me. They're just statements that might mean something to you.