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AND YE DIDNT NOTICE UNTIL MORNING!?

A little farfetched at times, and Sarah seemed like so many other heroines of popular stories (Katniss of the Hunger Games, Hermione of Harry Potter).
I wish that there was a little more diversity for her character, because she just seems to be there to be a supporting character (and not a very interesting or good one at that, eaither) until the end.
Speaking of which, the end was amazing! I wasn't expecting that, and the quote you used is one of my favorites.
Good job, and keep writing!