coffeesoakedshoes

That twist! Seriously wasn't expecting it, I thought the spook would come from the corpse itself :) Really enjoyed reading this!

You worded this so beautifully! Jerry's frustration LEAPS out of the text as well in her words and mannerisms.

This is such an interesting perspective, and I think you maneuvered it extremely well. My only suggestion is more variance of length in sentences, otherwise it was lovely!

This is so wonderful because it shows scars that aren't from others affecting you, but you affecting others. I loved this piece.

I love how you insinuate of these twisting emotions and circumstances without necessarily pointing to each...wonderful.

This is softly heartbreaking, I loved it.

This is so much raw emotion...shit, it was good. I feel torn apart now!

This was a lovely read! I really enjoyed your descriptions and the twist with Giscard, and overall I think that this was well thought-out and well-written :)