Reviews Given
This was lovely to read- it completely captured young shenanigans, goals, and thought processes :) Loved it.
Oh my god, this was such a good read! I was fully captivated by the eerieness and darkness of it all.
That twist! Seriously wasn't expecting it, I thought the spook would come from the corpse itself :) Really enjoyed reading this!
The "were you disappointed" HIT me in my gut- this was so good to read. Please, please keep writing :)
This story gave me the same "lost in time" reading feeling as I get while reading my favorite novels: it's truly addictive! Were this part of the back of a novel, I would 100% buy it. Keep writing, lovely!
This is so much raw emotion...shit, it was good. I feel torn apart now!
You worded this so beautifully! Jerry's frustration LEAPS out of the text as well in her words and mannerisms.
Man this was too true! Ah, you illustrated my inner writer and reader fighting so well!