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This was lovely to read- it completely captured young shenanigans, goals, and thought processes :) Loved it.

oh my god, this is so eerie!

Oh my god, this was such a good read! I was fully captivated by the eerieness and darkness of it all.

That twist! Seriously wasn't expecting it, I thought the spook would come from the corpse itself :) Really enjoyed reading this!

You worded this so beautifully! Jerry's frustration LEAPS out of the text as well in her words and mannerisms.

This is such an interesting perspective, and I think you maneuvered it extremely well. My only suggestion is more variance of length in sentences, otherwise it was lovely!

This is so wonderful because it shows scars that aren't from others affecting you, but you affecting others. I loved this piece.

I love how you insinuate of these twisting emotions and circumstances without necessarily pointing to each...wonderful.