United Kingdom • 83 y/o • MaleReviews Received
There are some good descriptions and a good twist, but twists need to be foreshadowed. Perhaps a police officer could notice Miriam's house was neat and tidy for someone with dementia, but then assume she had a good home help. That drops a hint that Miriam isnt as ill as she seems without giving everything away.
You evoke the characters and the setting with great skill. The clash of values rings true.
This is an evocative, if sad, story. I took a holidsy in Kingussie many years ago and I like dogs, so it struck a chord with me. Well done.
This is a nice twist on the theme of don't underestimate the elderly. Chsracters and settings are described very well
The central characters are well drawn and I like the twist at the end. I'm not sure how plausible it is, never mind it made me laugh and clearly it was meant to.
This is so good! I have no words. 5 stars.
A well written story that flows well taking the reader on a memorable journey...
Clever, with an ironic ending