United States • 24 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Raw and unfiltered emotion.
I understand the feelings of heart break, not that of a break up but somewhere along those lines. It's hard at first but it does get better. Always know just because one person couldn't see how amazing you are that you're not worthless, they were just down right stupid. Stay strong through these rough times.
Could have exploited the idea much more
Feelings expressed well
the poem was kind of tough. the memory of your first love is kind of tough but you will live through it and get to another day. there will be many more loves to come and each one you will learn from and then move on.
This story is simple and straight to the point. It reminds me of a poem.
Love the topic. Not often people write about voodoo dolls. Or at least I haven't seen many. I like the way it is written. The imagery used is very fitting. Good Job!
