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Elisenicole2014

Elisenicole2014 is from US United States • 27 y/o

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apemann
Andy (Formerly Apemann) reviewed Living Fears Poem

A little confused - and confusing - as you seem to be trying to incorporate too many ideas and themes into one poem. I get the gist of the poem, but the result is unsatisfying.

On the plus side; there is a spark of a storyteller in you that, with care and nurturing, could become a good one :-)

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