United States • 20 y/oReviews Received
very genuine and reflective, thanks for sharing this. I like how you tied the standards you have for love with everyone to the love you received/ didn't receive with your parents, that's really discerning of you- a lot of people don't connect the two when they truly are so connected. Just a couple things are the grammar, so for example "My standers for people dyed" should be "my standards for people died" and so forth. I can tell the piece came from your heart so thanks for that. Just know, you're allowed to feel anger and your anger is valid.
Yes they are. Beautiful writing! :)
this is incredible.
I have an empathy for your story/poem and I really liked reading it.
i really like it. you the taste of stories