Of course, the best example why love is a source of healing but also a potion of harming.
I am speechless. This tragic and sad story nearly brought me to tears, then gave me goosebumps. Definitely one of the best sad stories I have read.
I really love how this poem turns out, It is unique and deep.
I like those rhymes you had. I'm more of an author but i enjoy poems cause they are short. Some are very long and I don't appreciate that but this one was perfect length. I also like the personification relation between you and the doll. Nice job. Keep doing this stuff.