Canada • 32 y/oReviews Given
Needs more descriptive words, did not like this style.
This is terribly depressing, was difficult to read through it all. Found it to be all over the place.
This is terribly written, sounds like you wrote out the argument you had with yourself in your head... where's the redemption part?
I like the poem, just watch your spelling: You* not u..
Contrary to what Andy is saying, this spoke to me, was very satisfying. Why? Because I can relate very well. Though I do agree this may have been better as a poem, the content within the story is very relatable and touching. Especially the part where she says, I feel everything...