I like the poem, just watch your spelling: You* not u..
Contrary to what Andy is saying, this spoke to me, was very satisfying. Why? Because I can relate very well. Though I do agree this may have been better as a poem, the content within the story is very relatable and touching. Especially the part where she says, I feel everything...
Over-all, I really liked the concept. I'm aware this was meant to be a 100 word micro-fiction story, but there could have been more descriptive words used to add more detail to the blackout situation.