Kat

That was amazinging - but you made it seem like the wife was the problem.
In my short experience I found that:
1) men zone out while watching sports
2) when married they tend to fart and pass gas more
3) the toeilt seat struggle IS REAL
4) they don't understand much about what happens once a month - only that it's painful for both man and woman.
5) everything you say can and will be ignored.
😂 Either way, hallarious and worth reading again!!

So cute!!!!

Wow.
That was great.
You should be a comedian.

Holy crud. That was hallarious and just downright awkward at the same time. Love it.

Great, but the while clothes and knee-highs were a little confusing. Was Karen'a clothes not exceptable? Was it a uniform? Had Karen soilded her pants?
Sounds awesome! Hope you continue!
-KP

I agree with your response to Appeman. Sometimes critism can take a sharp turn, stab you in the back, and leave you bleeding inside.
Besides a few grammar errors, it's great! I wanna hear a ton more from this! It's a great start! Please, please, please continue!!!!
-KP

Pretty good, but I propose use of the ';' in the beginning. What should've taken it's place was the '-', which would signal that the narrator was adding on a peice of information.
Nice work!

Loved it!
One suggestion - the 'pain' and 'again' rhyme really killed the rhythm of the poem. It made my brain stop to look over the stanza instead of praise the work itself.
Besides that, I believe you are doing great!