United States • 25 y/oReviews Received
A nice poem spoiled by your poor punctuation. Please take more care: you have some talent as a writer which is being undermined by the sloppiness of your presentation.
sad.........but beautiful
Nice work. I hope you'll submit more of your work.
This is a good story. Your structure was intriguing and I really appreciated your longing for the stars, as I have a similar one for nature. Has a haunting tone that I also liked. Good job
I love this poem. It is the type of poem which makes me think and encourages me to read between the lines. It is hard to comprehend at first and that is something which I really like because you have to read it multiple times to truly understand the meaning behind it.
This, in my eyes is a deep poem. I love it... I am not very good at poetry lol but I think this is really good. Better than anything I could do!
