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This, in my eyes is a deep poem. I love it... I am not very good at poetry lol but I think this is really good. Better than anything I could do!
Nice work. I hope you'll submit more of your work.
A nice poem spoiled by your poor punctuation. Please take more care: you have some talent as a writer which is being undermined by the sloppiness of your presentation.
I know this feeling... I have felt it many times. Stay up late at night wondering if I might have the courage the next day to get up and do something other than lie there, slowly wasting away. I never ever had anyone to pick me up off the floor and hold me, stroking my hair back, telling me that I'll be okay. I love your poem. Just know that I am here.
I love it. It's amazing. I can relate... Waking up and wondering why? Why, if no one cares. Why. It takes so much anger and self hate to bring a blade to your own skin and cut. It sucks I have that much.
This is a great poem! I enjoy all of your work