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Wonderful!!!!!! I was moved with joy by that too. Can't wait to read the last parts. Well done.

Amazing!!!!!!!! I loved it so much. It certainly has a touch of Harry Potter. Well done.

Wonderful!!!!! I absolutely loved it. It would make a classic film. Well done.

Elaine's feelings are plausible and you convey them very well. I might have described the dining hall in more detail but the character's dilemmas are more important.

This was super satisfying to read. I really love the rhetoric, the message, and the whole general feel of it. Thanks for sharing!

I really loved your poem. Well done.