leethompson

When I read your story, the ending stumped me for a moment. I had to go back and re-check the date (June 1994) before I realized where this was going. The speaker in the tale is going to be Mark's guide, am I right? At any rate, this was a wonderful story! What a nice view of the Universe (and one I share).

Cornwall by Lee Thompson

What starts as a little escape trip from London (Sherlock City, since Benedict Cumberbatch), turns into the horrid discovery of a lifetime to hubby and wife.

I also appreciate that it is not another Lovecraftian copycat within which all are relatives to some supernatural species.

The format is flawless, and if there are any grammar issues, then I am too Non-Native-Speaker and too ill-educated to even notice a single one.

Writing style is fluent and believable. So are the characters (and doggies).

Thanks for sharing!