LeoraJackson

What an incredibly well put together poem. I love the structure and the rhyming scheme/flow, and of course the content snaps at you too. To me, this is what poetry really is.

"Life without you, cause without reason.
Touch without sense, time without season." is so beautiful. It's the kind of line that justifies itself and stands on its own. It's the kind of thing I think poetry is meant for. Thank you for bringing it into the world. <3