United Kingdom • 51 y/oReviews Received
Fast paced thriller with a great ending!
Very macabre. Although, I did wonder how the narrator gets to tell us his story if he dies in that attic? Imagine: he styled a writing implement out of a skull fragment and wrote his story in blood using the £10 notes, in hope that someone gets to the location before the mysterious stranger does
Well written mystery with an amazing ending.
Wow!!! That was awesome. A chilling cliffhanger. Well done.
Fine story that carefully builds to an important moral.
Wow! That was a great story. I found Sheila's attitude towards the Shaman most amusing. Well done.
While literally nothing but known & oldschool horrormovie cliche, this story is entertaining, because the author makes it a worthy read.
The characters are believable and we get enough info to follow the story. The story flow is also unbroken, albeit a bit lengthy, which takes quite some writing skill (no loss of what is going on & what already happened).
The ending is also classic, a classic scorned nowadays, but being older myself: Such were the writing standards & expectations, some decades ago.
Thanks for sharing!
woah it was a live stream this whole time