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Such a meticulous way of describing the most complicated phase of human lives... Hats off.

Simply great... A great source of motivation for hard times, thanks ha?

I thought it was about break up till I read the last line... Short and great, keep it up.

I was scared to be honest)I wanted to close the windows and turn on the lights))

You evokr the setting very well. I could imagine myself there.

I could feel mei's pain and could smell the nasty polluted air great description!