Lost

Gr8 i really liked it

good job

Brilliant keep up the good work.

write more. your so good at it

great. i love this ;)

Amazing. I hope to see more stories from you.

You play with your words quite well. It makes this piece lively and capturing to read. Personally, you did a very great job with it. I do hope to see more of your work in the future.

Is is good, but it is sad. I hope you have sorted yourself out.