France • 63 y/oReviews Received
I'm actually surprised with how this concluded, needless to say how I expected it to end was spun around a 180. I really liked this little story, and I agree with Rosemary, that it is complete in itself, great work and I can't wait to see what comes next.
Good story, with several excellent twists, but it's complete in itself. I wouldn't continue.
This was a very suspenseful story are you going to create a third part
Please do continue this story, I really like it a lot and I do think that by leaving it off as you did with that cliffhanger at a moment when one wrong choice could be fatal. I would honestly love to see you continue this.