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Cliffhanger makes me want to know if her plan goes smoothly.

Tugged at my heart.

Please do continue this story, I really like it a lot and I do think that by leaving it off as you did with that cliffhanger at a moment when one wrong choice could be fatal. I would honestly love to see you continue this.

This was a very suspenseful story are you going to create a third part

Good story, with several excellent twists, but it's complete in itself. I wouldn't continue.

I'm actually surprised with how this concluded, needless to say how I expected it to end was spun around a 180. I really liked this little story, and I agree with Rosemary, that it is complete in itself, great work and I can't wait to see what comes next.

This is softly heartbreaking, I loved it.

Really liked this piece. I liked the pace of it and the heart racing and then slower scenes. Really nice work. You could even draw out the action packed scenes a little more. Can't wait to see more of your work.