Lussac

Love it

Really enjoyed your story. Nice build-up of the characters.
Shame about a few spelling mistakes like:
house being reprocessed instead of repossessed, or taught face instead of taut (Hope you don't think that is being pernickety)
Look forward to reading more....

Fantastic!
Hope to read some more soon

Very powerful piece of writing!

I loved this story; one of the best I've read here to date. Well done!

Great - Very vivid imagery!

An honestly-written heart-felt account. Thank you for sharing.

Are you going to carry on with your story?