United Kingdom • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Well worth reading.
I like the short poems.
Very descriptive.
Hm. This is why I don't want to have a girlfriend. I like having friends.
I like the term 'brutally hard.' You bring two very different worlds up against each other and the contrast works well.
Just one thing, you refer to the floor and it seems to be outdoors. We usually say 'ground' for the natural earth beneath our feet and 'floor' for a man-made covering. That said, people sometimes refer to the 'forest floor' and the rest of your descriptions are good.
Sad, but true to life.
I did not realise quite how many poems you had written. Well done. Perhaps an anthology of poems could be produced? Can you tell us why the Matterhorn particularly inspirational?
That is a sound observation. That noise is the result of attachment to samsara, so you have to take up countering meditation.