United States • 25 y/o • MaleReviews Received
this is great piece of writing. I was feeling down today and this made me feel better. sad stories make me feel better about my life.
really it was so sad story it made me cry
You know i like sad stories, and this is the only one that makes me feel sad. i hope you do well.
It's amazing, nice story development, really made me understand why he wanted to kill himself that badly. However, I would suggest that you should elaborate the part where the mother blamed the boy a little bit more, but nice story!! Keep going ;)
This was very moving and it was well written. The ending was wonderful and by far my favorite part!
A story with a ring of truth about it, perhaps. I think your pen name on this site says a lot about how you view yourself as a person.
Good Luck,
Mike.
