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Simple, bittersweet and touching. Well done :-)
Even if you don't write poetry, that was great! Poems don't have to rhyme, they just have to mean something. I loved the rhythm and really think you've got this.
Thanks for the poem!
That was beautiful. It was unique yet relatable, and I respect that greatly.
A lovely poem about heart break
I thought this piece was beautifully written. It's a lovely poem
This was a good storie...I never wrote many stories mine suck...but this is very good please check out some of my stories and message me so I can get some good ideas...
Love,
Maddie â¤ï¸
Personally I believe that every story, or poem is meant to make the audience feel something, whether it be happiness, or sadness. And this story seemed to give off a lot of emotion, it makes the reader feel something, which is what I think the whole point is. Good job
This isn't a story though.