United States • 25 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Far from terrible.
Final paragraph was my favorite, good story.
Yet ANOTHER tiresome and boring story on the subject of teen suicide. This topic has been (if you'll excuse the pun!) done to death already. Sure, it's a slightly different slant on the genre, but it's still a teen suicide story.
You can write, no doubt about that. PLEASE try something that hasn't already been done a thousand times before next time?
Really nice and descriptive. Slightly dark, but in an enjoyable manner. I would possibly recommend it.
I thought it was really good, do not listen to apemann he is wrong.
I loved your use of words and the topic that you chose to be honest. I would like to read more from you.
That was awesome! I love the way that you described everything and know that you are undoubtedly an even more creative writer now that you have the experience and stuff. Wow, that sounded cheap. Anyway, I'm a part of a big (extended) family, with around 40 relatives. I love life sometimes, especially when life involves being awoken by a butt in your face and a sibling telling you they lost the remote. XD sarcasm, life's relief.
Holy life of depression. Wow. That broke my soul. 🤧 Wow.