I completely agree with Aspen-Faye, this story is beautifully written. Even though it is written based on a person, an egg is a great comparison to what you are writing about. It is a beautiful piece and I believe that you should keep writing stories in the future! (Don't mind rude comments, just focus on the good ones and ones that are trying to help you in a nice way.) You have gotten a wonderful message across through an amazing story, keep up the good work!