NouraDaExplorer

Okay, allowing for your youth and inexperience, this is not entirely a bad effort. However, the one GLARING fault in the narrative id the sudden appearance of Brad. One minute you are a baby left on a doorstep, the next you're being abused by someone named Brad.

For that reason I am returning the story to you to edit appropriately. Can you lo re-read what you have written and (a) correct all spelling and punctuation errors and (b) smooth out the awkward transitions from one part of the story to the next.

You clearly enjoy telling your story. A little more care will make the reading of it that more enjoyable for all. Well done on your first effort!