United States • 23 y/oReviews Received
Confused, confusing, incoherent, nonsensical. An utterly mind-boggling experience trying to READ this let alone make sense of it!
I want to just start off with-I absolutely love, love, love, that poem he had wrote for her. However there are a few little hiccups in the story that cause it to be a tad bit confusing. Overall I liked it though.
Love, love, LOVED the poem he wrote for her! I almost cried. No one has ever cared enough to do that for me, but right there I felt some weird connection that completely blew my mind! Thank you!
There are hiccups and grammar errors, but not too many. I advise reading it out loud.