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Jake J.

Pj_Croad is from GB United Kingdom • 30 y/o

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curtis
curtis reviewed Scary Times

A truly disturbing insight into the writers' warped mind. But first, let us start by summing up the many errors in this rushed fantasy of his:
1. The "our kid" is a rarely used stereotype of Manchester. The few and only times it is used in real life, it pronounced "arr kid". The author uses the incorrect reference several times in order to convince the reader he knows a lot about Manchester when in fact his knowledge is minimal.
2. Underlay but no carpet, carpet is always put down with underlay, nobody would leave underlay down withoutva carpet on top. Even, giving the "author" (a term I use losely) the benefitvof the doubt here, there is still no mention of WHY there is only underlay on the floor, no mention of unfinished decorating, new home, nothing that would give the story an element of sense.
3. Taking CDs. Where was he going to play these CDs? Living on the streets? Without even something to play them on? In addition, teenagers do not typically use CDs, they use the internet for their music.
4. No emergency operator would respond to a mother in distress like that. Totally unrealistic. However it does give more insight into te mind of the author: he clearly has a grudge against authority and a chip on his shoulder, likely from feeling wronged by the police tackling him/arresting him with likely good reason as this is clearly the work of somebody rather selfish.
Now to the disturbing bits:
1. Jake standing in his white boxer shorts. Absolutely no need to mention this, only reason is to tantalise the warped author's sick imagination.
2. Constant mention of Jake being a virgin.
3. The naked teenage girl. This author is certainly into both underage boys and girls.
4. "He began to pull Jake's boxer shorts off." The police only arriving after the author has fulfilled his sick fantasy.
5. The mention of equipment. Clearly some form of restraint, it woukd seem that as well as paedophillia that bondage is also the author's fantasy.
6. The naked girl legs spread. Too much detail that only somebody with an unhealthy appetite for children would write.
7. "I'm sorry mum." - disturbing, the author clearly has sexual fantasies of incest rape.
And finally, most disturbing is the author notes: other than pretending to use the story to raise awareness (of people like him), he states he has attended presentations by Childlune, Banado's and other childrens' services. Anybody reading this can be in no doubt that he has attended them to gain access to vunerable children, perhaps pretending to have been abused as a child to gain their trust. Make no mistake, this is NOT somebody who has been abused, nobody who had to suffer the pain, self loathing, fear and feeling of worthlessness of being sexually abused would write such a story. I am 100% sure of this. One last thing that cannot be denied by any rational human, is that the author is a paedophile. I, as somebody who HAS been abused, am 100% certain of that. The author is a paedophile.

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