J.B

This is a fine story, You describe the setting and build suspense very well. You also bring in a big contemporary issue, the lithium mining or potential for it.

You describe both the main character and the setting very well. I hope this story gets a lot more hits.

Clever and pleasing with interesting characters and a fine idea.

A well written story that takes the reader on a memorable journey.

That was a great story. Well done.

You write vivid descriptions and a good twist. The character of the old man is described well, as is the setting.

It's a beautiful story. The prose is lyrical and engaging. You have a great knack of telling a story. Kudos!!

This is a vivid and plausible evocation of a build up to disaster, also of a man torn between two cultures. Well done.