Chile • 61 y/oReviews Received
This is a good piece, it evokes both poverty and nature vividly.
You write vivid descriptions and a good twist. The character of the old man is described well, as is the setting.
Brilliantly observed, and well-written. Bravo!
Great story. Interesting, suspenseful and thought-provoking.
You have a great talent for vivid descriptions, and for telling exciting, interesting stories. I hope you publish more here.
It's a beautiful story. The prose is lyrical and engaging. You have a great knack of telling a story. Kudos!!
This is a vivid and plausible evocation of a build up to disaster, also of a man torn between two cultures. Well done.
That was a great story. Well done.