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Sachin Varghese

India • 27 y/o • Male

I love solving puzzles, writing programs, building robots, petting lions, fighting dragons, and wrestling with Gods.

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The Indescribable Feeling by Hayooy1996

Good job! I just have a small suggestion. Some lines in the poem are a bit long, so it breaks the flow for the person reading it.

For example, the line "Her feeling now is better than the biggest surprise" is a bit too long to fit there. Try working on this and it'll be much better. Keep writing :)

1 Apr, 2017 0 Edit Delete