Sadman1

Even for a young teen this is a poorly-written effort. You grammar is appalling: "this girl walks into the bathroom..." for instance. A more correct way of saying the same thing is 'a strange girl...' In addition your paragraphing is poor and the sentence structure is also below standard.
This reads like you had an idea, rushed to write it down before you forgot it and submitted the whole thing without giving it very much thought at all. That level of attention to your work is unacceptable, and it is for that reason I am returning your story to you.
If you would like to re-work the story and resubmit it, please do. In the meantime, READ: read the works of others on the site, especially youngsters like yourself. You can only learn by doing so.
Good luck!