I usually do not read this genre, but, this story surprised me and held my interest.
This is so sad, yet so beautiful. Children have no barriers and can see and feel things that most adults can not. I don't know if this is a true story, but it sure sounds believable. Excellent.
Love this, I laugh out loud and can truly appreciate it. Do read it, it will keep you smiling. Kudos....
Through out life we all have adventures, at times they are romantic ones. Andy has done a stellar job on this story. Paul ugh, well read the story and you will see what I mean. Carol conjures up other feelings. I thought she might become famous, but....well I don't want to give it away so read it yourself.
Before I got to the ending I had many ideas of what would happen and I think you will too. Good job Apeman.
Your poem is so true, we have gone through so much as a nation.
We will keep our heads held up high, because as a nation we know that freedom comes at a price. We have many hero's beneath our soil. Kudos...